My literacy narrative is going well so far. The ideas are flowing. I am very selective about who reads my writing because I fear about the feedback I would get it being positive or negative. I always try to put humor in my writing because i feel it makes the reader more interested in reading the rest of the story. So when I got the feedback that it was funny it was a real sense of accomplishment and relief. Also i got the feedback that it needs to be longer and more in depth, so while I am writing the rest of my story i will be sure to try and make it even more humorous. They also told me that i should put more stuff about my dad and I’s relationship and how this scrip (in the writing) helped grow our bond of father and son. Right now i am happy with the way my story ends but I will still try to use the conclusion endings in other of my works of writing for english 101.
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